I have made some modifications on my poem which I posted two days ago. This is my homework assigned by my teacher, but I have not written a English poem in my life. So I want some of you can give me some advice on it. Thank you, my dear friends. Life is a straight and dull line. Its beginning is you come to the world, and ending is the day you die. During the process you stay with endless work and goal, struggling to lead a successful life. This kind of life is designed by the God, no one has the chance to skip. It is just like an accident, you running across my line (life). Leaving me an enchanting smile. It is so sweet that I can not successfully escape. The wind puffed across the dead lake, bringing an ever-widening circle of ripples. Someone stirs my heart, like the soft thaw wind. The day you suddenly come into my sight, the whole world again becomes alive. Your occurrence makes the desert no longer dry. Losing myself in your unavoidable trap, I can not find th...