Life is no longer a simple line

I have made some modifications on my poem which I posted two days ago. This is my homework assigned by my teacher, but I have not written a English poem in my life. So I want some of you can give me some advice on it. Thank you, my dear friends.

Life is a straight and dull line.
Its beginning is you come to the world, and ending is the day you die.
During the process you stay with endless work and goal, struggling to lead a successful life.
This kind of life is designed by the God, no one has the chance to skip.
It is just like an accident, you running across my line (life).
Leaving me an enchanting smile.
It is so sweet that I can not successfully escape.

The wind puffed across the dead lake, bringing an ever-widening circle of ripples.
Someone stirs my heart, like the soft thaw wind.
The day you suddenly come into my sight, the whole world again becomes alive.
Your occurrence makes the desert no longer dry.
Losing myself in your unavoidable trap, I can not find the hidden exit.

I have been missing you in countless sleepless nights.
I always wander in my room, mediating in the milky moonlight.
The gentle light shines though the lucid windowpane, across my face, and ultimately into my heart.
It thaws the solid icy.（the solid icy symbols my hard heart which benumbed by the boring work）
I begin to come to life, and gradually change my line.
I realize the another mission of life, besides the challenging work and goal.

The brightest star in the summer sky, shining bright like your charming eyes.
The fireworms are flying among the flowers, with some tiny soft lights.
I devote to the summer summer night, and your appearance occurs to my mind.
No way to drive you out of my heart, you will forever live in my life.
You make my life full of flamboyant flowers and warm sunshine.
Hoping you will go into my dream tonight.
In my dream, you become my devoted knight, staying with me day and night.

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